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The sounds strike her ear drum as if they were uprooting trees and green goddess is likely to dig her to the ground...she closd her eyes as if closing her mind....things happening to her were a part of climax for her n she left her mind paralysd abt it...happenings happened as they had to happen.....THEN U CAN ADD ON FURTHER MAN..OKKThe sounds strike her ear drum as if they were uprooting trees and green goddess is likely to dig her to the ground...she closd her eyes as if closing her mind....things happening to her were a part of climax for her n she left her mind paralysd abt it...happenings happened as they had to happen.....THEN U CAN ADD ON FURTHER MAN..OKK